Pinki pie aka Pinkamena from My Little Pony Friend Ship is Magic I could really use a wish right now ! ... that my friends would be with me right now ! airplanes by B.o.B ft. Hayley Williams : [link]
I agree with one of the previous critiques, the face is a little too comedic for the scene, simply my opinion, but i disagree i feel those could be casual clothes and it's very original seeing as most human versions are dressed super slutty =c=; This is my first critique, this is all i have to say but it says i have to keep going soooooo..... i love the song choice and the hair, but if you changed the mouth slightly and maybe add tears in her eyes so it's less cartoonish? (bad example for the word since it's a cartoon but ya) Over all it's awesome!
I'm not a fan of the song, but taking points off for that would be bias.
VISION:
The expression doesn't quite capture the essence of the original FiM shot. The original screamed sadness and melancholy, this looks more comedic, but it's still well done.
I am now quite sure why she is wearing pajamas in a humanization of a scene where she was out and about on the street, so the clothes she's wearing don't fit her much.
With that said, I love the color scheme and the way you drew her. This may not capture the essence of the original FiM scene, but it's still pretty damn well made.
ORIGINALITY: This isn't necessarily bad, but a humanized version of a scene from the show has been done to the death.
TECHNIQUE: The coloring and drawing are great. Not outstanding, but great.
IMPACT: It didn't quite capture the dramatic essence of the original shot, but it still looks sad in a cute and somewhat funny way.
I'm not a fan of the song, but taking points off for that would be bias.
VISION:
The expression doesn't quite capture the essence of the original FiM shot. The original screamed sadness and melancholy, this looks more comedic, but it's still well done.
I am now quite sure why she is wearing pajamas in a humanization of a scene where she was out and about on the street, so the clothes she's wearing don't fit her much.
With that said, I love the color scheme and the way you drew her. This may not capture the essence of the original FiM scene, but it's still pretty damn well made.
ORIGINALITY:
This isn't necessarily bad, but a humanized version of a scene from the show has been done to the death.
TECHNIQUE:
The coloring and drawing are great. Not outstanding, but great.
IMPACT:
It didn't quite capture the dramatic essence of the original shot, but it still looks sad in a cute and somewhat funny way.
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